literature

ice cream, 12/10/13

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perhaps this is not the best way
to put it, but you're like ice cream
dripping through my hands. tacky,
clinging like sentiment,
sweet against my skin even
when the cone is gone.
not the best metaphor; I hope you know what I mean 
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JohnAshleigh's avatar
I think the extended metaphor worked perfectly - very imaginative and concise. Thankyou for sharing.

Regards,
John.