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the astronaut
I wish I didn't have to give you space, and wait
for you to come to me; I wish I didn't
constantly restrain myself, holding back
because you won't even meet me half way.
and I'm told that some good can come of it,
but sometimes, my eyes are negative, and
my heart is wrung, and all I can do is look
away, pretending I feel the same.
I wish I didn't have to give you space, and wait
for you to come to me; I wish I didn't
constantly restrain myself, holding back
because you won't even meet me half way.
and I'm told that some good can come of it,
but sometimes, my eyes are negative, and
my heart is wrung, and all I can do is look
away, pretending I feel the same.
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Something short (this, obviously), and something ridiculously long (last upload; so heavy and so light). I thought the title was clever... maybe it's not.
This is for those of you out there who watch me for prosetry. I know where you live! (Not really, unless we're talking metaphorically, as in what type of art must suits you as a habitat, and now I've scared you, so I'll wrap this parenthesis up...).
This is for those of you out there who watch me for prosetry. I know where you live! (Not really, unless we're talking metaphorically, as in what type of art must suits you as a habitat, and now I've scared you, so I'll wrap this parenthesis up...).
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I think it's clever too. I love that first line. It has a lot of different meanings for me.
I agree with =blue-strawberry though. I think you should draw out the space theme.
I agree with =blue-strawberry though. I think you should draw out the space theme.